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Face Form Practice 3

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Day 3 of Istebrak's 14 day challenge! 
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AnneLaureJousse's avatar
Hi, Hello from ProjectComment.
What strikes me the most when I saw your picture in the folder is the lighting. This is very well done. Congrats !
Though, the whole portrait is very bright. You could have added a little more contrast on the dark parts of the
head and in the neck.
One other thing that striked me is that I've found the face a little bit scary at first. Maybe this is due to the
absence of eyelash, or the space (a little too big) between the eye and the eyebrow. That gives a feeling of a non-quite human face.
As it is digital art, you might be able to lower the eyebrow without even changing the proportions of the forehead.
The shapes of every parts : eyebrow, eyes, nose, lips are very precise and very weel done. Maybe the eyebrow
look a little bit sketchy compared to the other pieces, but it is not really disturbing.
Although the lips are well shaped, they might be a little too big to be realistic.
I really like the cheeks and the chin : you made them sweet and the light seems realistic too.
The ears could have been less fuzzy, as they are not so far away in the portrait.
Overall, this is very nice !